HAPPY CHRISTMAS BIRTHDAY THING!
I printed out your script and had some fun doing some storyboards. Enjoy.
Script:
INT. PELICAN/ CALLSIGN: DELTA-260 - DAY
James wakes up. He lies in the cargo bay of a pelican craft filled with troopers. ABRAM, skinny, mid twenties, stands over him, holding a bio-reader.
1) Camera: Pelican flies in. Camera follows pelican as it veers away, focusing on it's call-sign.
2) Camera: Inside of pelican. Focus close in on James' face as he opens his eyes, zoom out gradually.
3) Camera: 1st PoV of James. Lens loses/regains focus as he looks about the cabin, seeing Abram above him.
Yes, I draw for fun. >_>;; Don't judge meeeeeeeeeee!!! *runs away*