i liked it, my only bone to pick with it is that the V-O in the beginning sounded ungodly deep lol, but pretty BA overall, ive also got some questions about characters for you, id like to do some sketches of Sigma and other main charcters, just to get the jist of how each one acts, is, and looks generally. kind of as a reference tool. so could you give me a list of characters and traits that you think really show in them? i also think that knowing what you characters look like will help with writing. this is a pretty long post-way to ramble chris