LNB AKA Killer 7
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If I could give some constructive criticism...
I think the concept as a whole is good.
I think what you should do, though, is get more close up shots of the buildings. With this video that you've posted, the viewer may feel like they're flying around with no real purpose. Maybe if you showed a little more story with the cinematography, people would be more hooked.
Also, I think instead of having the words up on the screen, have someone voice act it out. It would add more of a personal touch to it if they can hear someone's voice.
That's just my college level preference. (I'm currently taking a video editing class so I'm just learning about this stuff myself)
Good luck on your endeavors!
-Alexis
Hi there.
I'm still a bit of a noob in both armourmaking and video editing, but rather good (or novice could maybe be better(?)) with audio. Made a few (crappy/not so good) songs myself (all like 1min long... derp).
I'd like to join you on this machinima, to gain some experience on audio acting. I have though, some experience on live acting from when I was an actor on a play with the local church community some years back. I've never made a machinima before, only watched. But I think now is the time for me to be part of one.
Youtube: SchlagerNinja
Xbox Live: SchlagerNinja
Email: svanspate@gmail.com
So what's the plan? What should I say in the voice sample?
EDIT: Also,
"Main character" maybe?
Saber
Yes mama!
I'll get right on that.
SchlagerNinja
#1 Your in.
#2 I'll send you a XBLM.
#3 GOD DANGET I spelled main interact.